Sunday, December 28, 2008

'Ashwathama udaas hai'

Main bachpan mein doodh nahi pi saka
aate(flour) mein paani hi mila glass mein
Dekho main kaun hu
main peeda ka van hu
main shrapit hu
main peedit hu

Peeda ajar hai...amar hai
sukh bik gaya hai abhi abhi
main krishn nahi
main abhi bhi jeevit hu
ranbhumi mein bhi hu
garbh mein bhi

Aao jhaanko mere andar
dekho ye teheniya kahan badh chali
wo dekho anginat saanp k bacche narmada k tat par
wo bachpan k anaam bacche kuchalte hue kechue ko

Dhyaan se dekho krishn
humari nayi khoj..
camera phone hai

4 comments:

Sumit Purohit said...

unbelievable...
ab pata chala kavita bhaag ke kahan aa gayi hai...
Makrand should read this...this is amazing brief of his whole play...let me find his email id...
Maate aisa kuchh chamatkar mere gaane ki panktiyun ke saath bhi karo...ab jab tumhne kavita ka apaharan kar hee liya hai

Priyamvada said...

Bikul...koshish aur yeh lamba samay rang laayenge

Rishabh P Nair said...

I was going through my old subscriptions and ended up on this poem. Can't even tell you how nostalgic this feels. Wish you were still blogging!

Priyamvada said...

I shall resume; you should encourage me