Band darwaazo ke peeche
Jaane kitne ghar roz jalte hain
Kabhi kabhi raakh milti hai
tou kabhi phaili hui raakh par bane hue pairo ke nishan hi dikhte hain
Darwaazo ko band karte hue
kabhi kuch aankhe dikhti hain
phir kisi din wo aankhen
bin paani sadak par kahi padi milti hain
Peeche ki cheekho ka sira kabhi mila tou
kuch nahi hua bus,
aawao ka jhund badhta hua dikha
badhte hue gali se guzar gaya
Darwaaze kabhi khulenge lagta tou nahi
kabhi koi khula reh gaya tou
milega tou wohi sab
andhere mein kone par baithee hui Bina aur kuch kapde
Shayad isiliye in galiyo mein kabhi
andhera nahi hota
bus diye bujh jaate hain
kuch kamro mein ek waqt ke baad...
6 comments:
Just a chance visit to your blog.
This is quite touching ! And coming from the pen of someone so young! I guess you must have worked for an NGO for the cause of improving the lives of sex workers?
Keep writing !!
ohh..thnx...but hvnt worked in any such NGO..jus ma observation n wot i can feel abt it
amazing!!ur poem reflects great maturity...
jus an advice though from a technical point of view...
if u try and follow a meter(in case u wanna know what a meter is, look for it on wikipedia), it will multiply the beauty of the poem.....
Adaab
Mukarrarr Mukarrarr...
Samvartha 'Sahil'
hi this is vikas its great observation
EXOTIC! http://bistritipoddar.blogspot.com/2009/08/i-am-sinner-with-beautiful-heart.html something similar....I would love your take on it!!! Stay blessed...and keep writing..You are an authentic writer!!
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